Main idea: How my classmates made me a more positive person by their passion and considerations.
Topic sentence:
* I don't think I will ever have the chance to run into anyone that can influence me more than the other 29 girls in my class.
*The year I spent with them has gradually changed my pessimistic personality and made me more optimistic.
*I learned how to express my feelings and found the real me due to their help.
*They taught me friendship isn't just a kind of sentiment, but also the greatest power to change a person.
Topic sentence:
* I don't think I will ever have the chance to run into anyone that can influence me more than the other 29 girls in my class.
*The year I spent with them has gradually changed my pessimistic personality and made me more optimistic.
*I learned how to express my feelings and found the real me due to their help.
*They taught me friendship isn't just a kind of sentiment, but also the greatest power to change a person.
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