11/5 new thoughts from discussing with studio classroom's teacher

The teacher really helped me a lot with deciding my specific topic. With her help, I solved my greatest concern about being too personal and that I might loose my connection with the audience. 

The teacher's suggestions and my changes:

1. I overcame my problem with not being able to fully express my own feelings. There must be a lot of people including the audience who have the same problem as I did. I can use this connection to lead them to my topic.

2. I can talk about why people can't express feelings and my own reasons why I can't express mine( my family, the society, and the people I met...) 
I researched some information of what some experts found out about why  people can't say their feelings out loud and some general studies.  

http://www.counselingcenter.illinois.edu/self-help-brochures/self-awarenessself-care/experiencing-and-expressing-emotions/

http://www.rachelgreen.com/ei-expressing-feelings.html

http://suite101.com/a/free-emotions-by-owning-and-expressing-feelings-a158667

http://advice711.com/emotions_feelings/expression.html

http://www.ictstexas.com/express-your-feelings-in-4-easy-steps

After talking about the information and the theories of why caused problems of expressing oneself then I'll talk about what the experts say that would help express one's feelings.
After talking about the research, I want to come back and talk about myself and the most essential reason that made a difference in me- my classmates. 

Manifest the things they've done that changed me and what my changes are by act a little play on stage and make the presentation more entertaining and real.