Main idea: How friends influence us and how my classmates made me a more positive person by their passion and considerations.
Topic sentence1:
Almost everyone knows that their friends can affect their life in a way or another but what most people don't know is that this effect is far more powerful than they can imagine.
supporting sentences:
a.Your friends don't just influence your decisions but they can alter your view of the world, change your perception and turn you into a different person!
b.The ways your friends affect your life:
*They change your beliefs about things: Your beliefs can be changed.
*They affect your self confidence.
*Your friends affect your behavior.
*Your friends can infect you with bad emotions
Topic sentence3 :
* I don't think I will ever have the chance to run into anyone that can influence me more than the other 29 girls in my class.
supporting sentences:a.I learned how to express my feelings and found the real me due to their help.
b.They taught me friendship isn't just a kind of sentiment, but also the greatest power to change a person.
c.the real experience I had to support my theory of the first and second paragraph.
Topic sentence1:
Almost everyone knows that their friends can affect their life in a way or another but what most people don't know is that this effect is far more powerful than they can imagine.
supporting sentences:
a.Your friends don't just influence your decisions but they can alter your view of the world, change your perception and turn you into a different person!
b.The ways your friends affect your life:
*They change your beliefs about things: Your beliefs can be changed.
*They affect your self confidence.
*Your friends affect your behavior.
*Your friends can infect you with bad emotions
Topic sentence2:
Make your friends a good influence on you.
supporting sentences:
a.surround yourself with positive people .
b.Friendships can benefit you in lifting your self-esteem.
c.Your friends should lift you up and help you to be the best person you can be.
Topic sentence3 :
* I don't think I will ever have the chance to run into anyone that can influence me more than the other 29 girls in my class.
supporting sentences:a.I learned how to express my feelings and found the real me due to their help.
b.They taught me friendship isn't just a kind of sentiment, but also the greatest power to change a person.
c.the real experience I had to support my theory of the first and second paragraph.
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